Monday, December 31, 2007

three landscapes, poem from the city



Interior
Impotant incandascent light
the tint is of poison blue

Illusion
Orange trees.
3 O clock Sun.
elegant green.
rich yellow
delicious smell of cigerrettes
And the mood is,
as if the Sea around.

Exterior
Yellow is obscene as a naked yoke of egg
The smudged view of distant trees is marijuana green
The iris clocks, in the trippy eyes of angels tick away
the moon through the jelly-black roads

4 comments:

  1. i love "illusion" and am fascinated how you see so much in colour. technicolored poetry this! :)

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  2. nice visual poetry. good induced images :-)

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  3. Wonderful Writing style. I like your thoughts.. Your Poem is well written. Cant wait to read more. I love posts like this, it makes my day actually, thanks!!

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